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 Posted: Sat Mar 17th, 2012 06:45 pm
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So I've finished my latest play (first scene's up on the forum if you want to take a look) and an interesting idea just poppoed into my head: since it's a historical piece, would it be beneficial to add a narrator to explain a bit about the period? Maybe I could work it out as flashforwards. I don't know yet. What do you guys think of plays with narrators?

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The question of narration, as I see it is one of control. Narration is going to give you more control over how the work is interpreted, of what lenses and contexts the audience views it though.

I'd workshop it both ways, with and without.

I personally love narration.

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I like the notion of a narrator..or narrators that are also characters in the play who serve both roles...but I really seldom think a stand alone separate narrator is a good idea.

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You can have the characters enact as the narrrators. There are a lot of step to the side comments made by characters in plays. It can be narrated that way.

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If you want to look at the classic use of a narrator read the play - and then rent - the DVD of "Man For All Seasons", an historical play. The role is "The Common Man." It is available for a movie version on DVD starring Paul Scofield. He won an Academy Award that year, if I am correct. Brilliant performance.

I used a narrator in one of my plays, who also is a character in the play and it won me 5 national awards in one year and an Equity full production that year. Actually, it won more awards that year than any other play as listed in the Dramatists Guild magazine than any other play listed that year.

So, narrators are useful if done appropriately and creatively.

The key is to make sure the Narrator is involved in the action and there is a transformation from one scene to the next that advances the action. If it is just an "introduction" into a scene or a "summation" of the previous scene, you will be "dead meat" or "dead weight" dramatically. You can not just fill in the gaps between each scene, you must dramatically lead forward the action of the play from one scene and seamlessly link it to the next.

I kind of agree with Michael Penny's comment. A stand alone narrator, without being a character or multiple characters - as in the case of A Man for All Seasons - is probably not very effective. The "stand alone narrator" removes us from the continuous growing action of the play.

For instance the Stage Manager in "Our Town" keeps us involved in the continuous action of the play. Beautifully done.

If the narrator "halts" the action to "explain" something, you stop the overall arc of the play.

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IMR

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In early drafts of one of my plays, I used the main character also as a narrator. I soon took out the narration scenes because I could see that I was using narration as a crutch rather than to serve the story. This particular play is better without narration.

If you're adding a narrator to explain a bit about the period of the play, leave the narrator out. Put enough in your script that audiences can figure out what they need to know. Trust your audience and your text.

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Just a side note: "The Common Man", as narrator, was left out of the 1966 Scofield/Zinnemann film version of "A Man For All Seasons". (They presented it as a straight narrative film without commentary by any of the characters.)

There is a 1988 version, with Charlton Heston, which restores The Common Man character to the spot of narrator.

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Bob,

Thanks for the head's up.

It's been a long time since I saw the two filmed versions.

Ideas still hold.

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IMR

P.S. Another play example is "Conversations With My Father" by Herb Gardner

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John Guare, too, has used narration by his characters. "The House of Blue Leaves" and "Six Degrees of Separation" are worth a look.

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I think in epic theatre stand-alone Narrator would be appropriate. Also in meta-fiction play.

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