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 Posted: Wed Mar 5th, 2008 07:46 pm
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 Posted: Thu Mar 6th, 2008 02:05 am
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Nice reverse at the end. Fun piece but a little slight as it stands. You might be able to make what's at stake for them in this reverse lottery more vivid.

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 Posted: Thu Mar 6th, 2008 02:18 pm
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Thanks, Martin, I appreciate the feed-back.

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