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	CRITIQUING Some guidelines for effective critiquing.	5	2,150	Paddy	Sun Apr 6th, 2008 11:19 pm by theatralite
	THE RAW: Prologue & Act I, Scene I (REVISED) WARNING: STRONG LANGUAGE; MILD VIOLENCE	3	183	Jude Bresnan	Tue Aug 26th, 2008 07:20 am by solarcirclegirl
	The Cranes Are Falling newest rewrite with additional dialogue	0	15	John Watts	Sun Aug 24th, 2008 12:10 am by John Watts
	THE RAW (Act I, Scene I) This is my first full length play. I completed my first scene, revised it several times, and want to know what you think about it. Please reply with good criticism.	8	314	Jude Bresnan	Thu Aug 21st, 2008 05:18 pm by Jude Bresnan
	The Cranes Are Falling An incomplete one-act - would like feedback	6	119	John Watts	Wed Aug 20th, 2008 03:46 am by John Watts
	Please May I Live? Ten Minute Play	1	42	Martin H	Tue Aug 19th, 2008 09:45 pm by billh
	Pure Luna Moths Ten Minute Play -- 2 females	2	55	billh	Mon Aug 18th, 2008 12:16 pm by billh
	One Legged Pigeon - 20 minute one-act a new one-act - would like feedback	2	64	John Watts	Mon Aug 18th, 2008 11:58 am by John Watts
	The Golf Club A piece of 'excentric comedy'.	0	35	castlecat7	Mon Aug 18th, 2008 05:14 am by castlecat7
	Sit Like A Lady A Monologue for one male actor (9 pages)	6	417	Mary Alice	Sat Aug 16th, 2008 04:41 pm by Potabasil
	The Death of Mr. Jones and Other Stories Hello. This is my very first play (the first act of it) and I would like some help finishing it. ANy constructive help for a noobie would help a lot. Thanks	4	241	Jude Bresnan	Sat Aug 16th, 2008 12:00 am by stagewriter
	Acquiring The Royal Nightie JUST FOR FUN	0	81	Potabasil	Sun Aug 10th, 2008 03:15 pm by Potabasil
	Turquoise One Scene	11	371	IowaScribe	Tue Aug 5th, 2008 06:01 am by IowaScribe
	Final Play A Farewell To Art	20	1,455	Mick Somatosis	Sun Aug 3rd, 2008 08:36 am by Mick Somatosis
	The Lovers' Game A cross genre experiment?	0	67	AustinS	Fri Aug 1st, 2008 05:53 pm by AustinS
	My New Full-Length - Act 1 Scene 2	3	120	dresdenkiss	Fri Aug 1st, 2008 05:27 pm by spiny norman
	"The Wingman" - Ten minute comedy Critiques welcome	10	342	Squirrellake	Fri Aug 1st, 2008 03:00 am by Edd
	Henry Dearest Act 1 Scene 2	3	123	tsaurus	Wed Jul 30th, 2008 12:28 pm by dresdenkiss
	Henry Dearest Scene 1 - Comments Appreciated	5	221	tsaurus	Wed Jul 23rd, 2008 05:51 pm by spiny norman
	Finding Grace another scene	7	223	IowaScribe	Tue Jul 15th, 2008 11:13 pm by ggf
	THE RAW (Act I, Scene II) WARNING: STRONG LANGUAGE	0	81	Jude Bresnan	Tue Jul 15th, 2008 01:39 am by Jude Bresnan
	"The Machine" An attempt at absurdism. 15 pages	10	384	SnowArmadillo	Thu Jul 10th, 2008 06:27 pm by AustinS
	Waiting For Gordon Screen Play - Tell me what you think, please.	3	161	thedayglocarousel	Wed Jul 9th, 2008 06:47 pm by muncy
	Something Lost, a full-length play. This is Part 4 The ACTUAL final part	7	265	Celsun	Mon Jul 7th, 2008 01:36 am by spiny norman
	Need feedback on formatting of a new play	2	128	Steamboat Chambers	Sat Jul 5th, 2008 01:57 am by Steamboat Chambers
	Something Lost, a full-length play. This is Part 3 Part 3, the final part	0	67	Celsun	Sat Jun 28th, 2008 09:34 am by Celsun
	Something Lost, a full-length play. This is Part 2 Part 2	0	68	Celsun	Sat Jun 28th, 2008 09:29 am by Celsun
	Something Lost, a full-length play. Crtitique me, please, and I'll return a favor A family comes apart with the arrival of a visitor	0	87	Celsun	Sat Jun 28th, 2008 08:43 am by Celsun
	The Garbage Bear A Short Alaskan Sketch	6	491	playwright_bo	Sat Jun 14th, 2008 01:20 am by Nate88
	Heavensent Act II, scene 3	1	125	solarcirclegirl	Wed Jun 11th, 2008 05:00 pm by Michaeltw721
	Heavensent Act II, Scene 1	1	119	solarcirclegirl	Wed Jun 11th, 2008 03:19 pm by Michaeltw721
	Dialectical Difference (act one) A Farce i'm working on.	0	145	tcbscorps	Thu Jun 5th, 2008 07:26 pm by tcbscorps
	Savannah, The Play Act 3	0	124	MaxJason	Fri May 30th, 2008 07:49 pm by MaxJason
	Savannah, The Play Act 2	0	88	MaxJason	Fri May 30th, 2008 07:48 pm by MaxJason
	Savannah, The Play act one	0	127	MaxJason	Fri May 30th, 2008 07:45 pm by MaxJason
	HAPPY BULLET WARNING - This play includes adult themes and material with a "South Park" sensibility (ie equally opportunity offensive).	2	139	LadyBug	Thu May 29th, 2008 03:04 pm by LadyBug
	Heavensent Act II, scene 2	0	86	solarcirclegirl	Thu May 29th, 2008 02:02 pm by solarcirclegirl
	This Doesn't Leave The Room a play about New Orleans on Katrina day	1	131	jeremydburgess	Wed May 28th, 2008 07:50 pm by Jude Bresnan
	Narcissus -- a one-act play (part II of II) Two guys, two girls, two love triangles	0	91	ricketybridge	Wed May 28th, 2008 06:34 am by ricketybridge
	Narcissus -- a one-act play (part I of II) Two guys, two girls and the love triangle(s) that form between them	0	95	ricketybridge	Wed May 28th, 2008 06:23 am by ricketybridge
	On Thin Ice Is this scene boring??	10	1,220	LeesuhBee	Wed May 28th, 2008 06:03 am by ricketybridge
	Heavensent Act 1; Scene 5	1	128	solarcirclegirl	Mon May 19th, 2008 06:04 pm by Michaeltw721
	Heavensent Act 1; Scene 4	1	112	solarcirclegirl	Mon May 19th, 2008 06:03 pm by Michaeltw721
	"Die, the Beloved Country"	1	213	IanFraser	Fri May 16th, 2008 11:59 am by IanFraser
	Heavensent Act 1; Sc 3	1	144	solarcirclegirl	Tue May 13th, 2008 06:48 pm by Michaeltw721
	Heavensent Act 1; Scene 1	2	147	solarcirclegirl	Thu May 8th, 2008 01:58 pm by solarcirclegirl
	A Common Mistake	2	240	Michaeltw721	Wed May 7th, 2008 06:25 pm by Michaeltw721
	Heavensent Scene 1: Act 2	1	122	solarcirclegirl	Wed May 7th, 2008 03:05 pm by Michaeltw721
	Magic Stones: Joseph Smith Act 1	2	293	mrduane	Mon Apr 28th, 2008 07:58 pm by playwright_bo
	"ILLOOSERY" (full lenght play) please tell me what's wrong!	5	437	LadyBug	Sat Apr 19th, 2008 03:34 pm by in media res
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