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 Posted: Tue Feb 6th, 2007 03:50 pm
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Some of us gaze into our dance
partner’s eyes like others glance
contemplatively at stars, seeking
guidance in our steps, one leading
the other obediently following

each feeling the other’s rhythm
like listening to evening lake waves
or studying bending grass fields,
others awaiting turns patiently
like sitting early in a quiet church
hoping within themselves to somehow
learn what shape God really is

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 Posted: Wed Feb 7th, 2007 01:26 am
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timmy,

I added mana to your account for your consistency of posting and the gift of beauty you bring to the Forum - and therefore my life - with your poems.

best,


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Last edited on Wed Feb 7th, 2007 01:27 am by in media res

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 Posted: Thu Feb 8th, 2007 04:42 pm
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This poem has been dancing with my mind since I read it.

There is something there that makes it....haunting.

Thank you for sharing this peice.

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