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timmy
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Posted: Fri Aug 22nd, 2008 07:10 pm
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The sky resembled something
different last night
like something with something
else behind it
like looking at a snowglobe
in summer
or something like that
*
I left the house to remove
myself from the scene
to re-enact that which made
me happy earlier
alone, i did that thing
again:
i covered a dark patch on my face
with cream
*
No matter how long i stayed
outside
my name followed me
like a secret
but no one was there
to tell
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Posted: Mon Aug 25th, 2008 01:59 am
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Posted: Thu Aug 28th, 2008 04:38 am
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Thank you.
timmy
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