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 Posted: Mon Aug 14th, 2006 08:34 pm
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DWolfman
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A single boulder

Falling, gathers all its friends;

The mountain crumbles.

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The dewdrop blanket

Silver in the fading mist

Whispers of the dawn.


 


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Even a man who is pure of heart...

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 Posted: Wed Aug 9th, 2006 10:41 am
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Hi Kate.  Powerful Haiku.  It is a fascinating way to try and say something economically and an excellent way to start writing poetry don't you think?  You have to be so precise and it is a good skill for writing more lengthy pieces.  (I did post a couple of Haiku also on one of my poetry strands.)  Any Haiku writers or budding poets join in and have a go!  And CoreUpted, I think from your comments to me on my other thread that you have a poet's heart!  Go on.  Experiment! x

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 Posted: Wed Aug 9th, 2006 09:22 am
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My attempt at Haiku...

NAOMI

 At eight forty-five

she ran after her sister.

Flowers in the road.

 

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 Posted: Tue Aug 8th, 2006 11:16 pm
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Once when bored I decided to change all of the error messages on my website to Haiku...

I feel it makes the ol' 404 a much less grating experience, especially with me rebuilding the site at present :)


Go Team Haiku

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 Posted: Sat Aug 5th, 2006 09:34 pm
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stars in silky sky
couple, spawning Northern Lights:
tomorrow, our turn

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 Posted: Fri Aug 4th, 2006 05:41 pm
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Haiku: A 17 syllable form of Japanese poetry that consists of three unrhymed lines of five, seven and five syllables

MY DEEP HAIKU

Seventeen syla

Bulls unrhymed lines of lines of

Five, seven, five syl...

 

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