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 Posted: Thu Jan 14th, 2010 10:05 pm
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timmy
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Not any
more;

more like
a cork eased
up the wet end
of a red wine
bottle

or a silver lid
sealed tightly
on a jar of real
raspberries;

your voice
coming back
to me through
the tall grass

Later, we cried
in each other’s
arms, unwinding

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 Posted: Fri Feb 5th, 2010 07:05 pm
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i enjoyed reading this poem. i can connect to this poem, i love the simile that you put on the second stanza.

keep up the good work!!!!

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