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 Posted: Thu Aug 17th, 2006 12:36 am
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Like to get feedback on this poem of mine. Thanks.




 



IMAGES AREN’T REAL




although they try to be




COPIES ARE A DOZEN




yet not one can be for real




THE ORIGINAL IS UNIQUE




to which pseudo things exist




IMAGES OF THE REAL THING




are but memories




for which copies have replaced




 




 




 

Last edited on Thu Aug 24th, 2006 11:19 pm by fred

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