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 Posted: Tue Sep 19th, 2006 10:36 pm
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an open window, nuns
in shadows ticking clock
bedroom door shutting
a soft goodbye venus dusk

between rains & fence
posts cut autumn brown corn
stalks near a county highway

my moon buttons on a shirt
two minutes before midnight
one’s breath whispering love

you a blank page of a good
book last thoughts before sleep
eyes seeing you through dreams

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 Posted: Tue Sep 19th, 2006 10:56 pm
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I really liked this :)

It gave me a real feeling of the fullness of "space" and tugged at several fond memories

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