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 Posted: Fri Oct 6th, 2006 11:48 pm
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timmy
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beneath a pale yellow

quarter moon

climbing

over the circle colored
cored & white fallen birch,

i walk with you

the silence of our foot path
interrupts natural growth

no matter how many times
we have trailed here

dewed cat grass
creeps closer, crying
to reach the other side

as you and i
move closer

clinging

beneath a pale yellow

quarter moon

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 Posted: Mon Oct 9th, 2006 02:02 am
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Timmy,

Wow!  You have found love beneath the night sky.

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