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 Posted: Wed Aug 10th, 2016 05:27 pm
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a funeral is held and odd people
come together to remember odd events:
a drunken rambling in 1978,
the trauma of a dog hit by a Dodge Dart

mother cried, father nearly died that day
and later that evening, ivy scratched
against my bedroom screen

Last edited on Fri Aug 12th, 2016 05:39 pm by timmy

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 Posted: Thu Aug 11th, 2016 03:22 am
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Glad I stopped by the forum to read this. So heartfelt. Thank you. Forgive me if I overstep, but I'm wondering if you might try "a drunken rambling in '78," and see it that rings any better.

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 Posted: Fri Aug 12th, 2016 05:38 pm
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Rings true, Edd. Edited.

Thanks for the comments.

My youngest son did a summer internship in Golden. He hiked seven of the 50+ 14,000 mountains. I will be flying out to drive back home with him soon. Will wave to you from the airport.

timmy

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