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 Posted: Thu Dec 12th, 2019 12:53 pm
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Potabasil
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Kitchen table covered
silver waiting
to be polished

Jars are sterilised
The chutney is made
apple sauce galore
Goose ordered
ham to follow

Christmas pudding
steaming
cake in the oven
minced pies
I made a dozen
will there be enough?

House upside down
clearing the dresser
was that a mouse?

Is there any mistletoe?

The radio is on
playing
The Fairytale of New York

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 Posted: Fri Dec 13th, 2019 10:50 am
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Tiny point - I think it would be improved by the inclusion of question marks

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 Posted: Sat Dec 21st, 2019 09:49 am
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Thank you Paul
Will do

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