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 Posted: Mon Dec 18th, 2006 05:43 pm
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Mana: 
it rained earlier, still wet

her hair a wet dance

breeze through blond

 

an orange perfect candle

wet, wax minutes dripping

away one Sunday evening 

minute after midnight

 

our last kiss like a jar

of fireflies, even the clock’s

bells blushed twelve times,

once for every curvature

 

how i envy her love

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