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 Posted: Fri Dec 29th, 2006 03:29 am
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timmy
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i peer into redness,

searching

for a tiny piece of my soul
but there are so many layers

redness overwhelms me,
interrupting me, one red
moment at a time

it’s so hard traveling
between red, one foot
softly in front of the other

it’s not the end
of the world,
this search for red,
but sometimes
i think i can see it
clearly from here

does eternity only
go forward

God
been gone so long
why don’t you call

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