View single post by scenedreamer
 Posted: Sat Aug 5th, 2006 04:20 am
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Someone who posted seemed to assume the guy was black.  I assumed he was white.  I guess he could be either from South Africa.  Did I miss something?  I thought he was white because of his statement about the "white' guys being shot and also he is described as white in the character description. 

I assumed the woman was black for no reason at all except it would add interest.  The race might be important if it somehow relates to the theme of the story.  But it is would also an interesting juxta position.

You must develop it further.  Your dialogue is terrific.  You have us all enthralled. 



Last edited on Sat Aug 5th, 2006 04:25 am by scenedreamer