|View single post by CoreUpted|
|Posted: Mon Aug 7th, 2006 06:31 pm||
|i know i'm taking massive and uncalled for liberties with someone elses work here, but i've written another verse for nikip's poem (is verse right?).
when I picked up on your picture in the charity ad in the paper
and dropped you down my list of my priorities
I thought to myself
“Why can I only see the cliche?”
Why can I not see behind your eyes?
sorry. i accept this is probably a total crap addition (poet i'm not) and probably not PC and not even where nikip was going. also, i can't see straight - been underwater for about 16 hours of the last 36. need sleep. goodnight all (it's only gone noon here but i've been on 2 night dives).