View single post by Darkja
 Posted: Thu May 20th, 2010 01:53 pm
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I haven't read the work so I will keep my comments particularly brief. I write in a non-realistic vein primarily. While there are no set "rules" by other people you do somewhat set your own. Did the hallucinations only being in Act II? If so I could see how it could be confusing to anaudience viewing (it may be clarer in a read) the piece. Typically you set the style, tone, and rules of a world early in a piece. Once they are set they are difficult (albeit not impossible) to augment. For example consider the reverse of what you've done if you were writing non-realism. A sudden shift to realism could be jaring. Just my thoughts. I am by no means a really experienced playwright.