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 Posted: Wed Jul 21st, 2010 01:07 pm
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Paddy



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Raymond.

Really like this.

It's been said that in the first three minutes of a play, you have the audience's complete attention. Personally, I love to sit in a theatre and not have a clue what's going on. It engages.

Nice with the different 'voices' of your characters.

I can almost sense you writing this. Frustrated by constraints and then making them work for you...probably in need of a shave.

Really like this. Well done.

Paddy