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|Posted: Wed Aug 16th, 2006 12:15 am||
Interesting. A little long, but fun in its rhyme and reason.
It sounds like a folk song. Or maybe a country song. Or more likely a song in a play or musical.
Reminds me of someone. I'm not sure who.
Hmmm. Maybe Kal.??
Shorten it, find a chorus, give it a melody, make it a little more subtle and it's definitely a song. Voltaire said, "Anything too silly to be said should be sung." Sounds like that might qualify. Not sure I can imagine a character saying it, but I can imagine one singing it. Especially if more inuendos and subtlty was used.
In fact, it could be hilarious.
Last edited on Wed Aug 16th, 2006 12:26 am by scenedreamer