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 Posted: Fri Dec 10th, 2010 09:37 pm
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timmy

 

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Watching my Dad the last couple of his days...well, your writing has it by the throat and won't let go.

Even with his Alzheimer's and pending explosion of his aneuryism, something in the back of his eyes knew it was time (even if he didn't).  The body doesn't lie.

"no chance that she would cut my throat"...is a terrific image and line

timmy