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 Posted: Sun Dec 11th, 2011 09:49 pm
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Paddy



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Mana: 
Read the first bit of dialogue, and thought....oh..... I like to be in the dark.

Read to the end. Engaging, interesting...want to read more...but I'd take out the first dialogue from the Accused...too much like exposition. Just too much information off the mark.

paddy