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 Posted: Mon Mar 19th, 2012 12:32 am
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timmy

 

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There's been a spate of employee airplane rage here in the USA the last months. This poem ranks right up there w/what I've been reading.

It appears you're gearing toward the humorous...and that's fine, b/c it is. You approach the sinister with the "offer" but then let it drop. Wouldn't mind you taking it a bit closer to the "edge"...

I do like where you take me though..."deli counter ducks" is one fine image.

timmy