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 Posted: Sat Jun 29th, 2013 03:05 am
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Mana: 
Language is somewhere between 1890 and 1918 but it gets me into a "Somewhere in Time" kind of mood by the second stanza. I'm hearing your footwork on the surfaces throughout. Nice rhythm and a touch of rhyme toward the end to see me off.

This a pleasant sounding poem. I bet it sounds terrific read aloud.

timmy