View single post by Laphillyboy
 Posted: Fri May 30th, 2014 04:11 am
PM Quote Reply Full Topic
Laphillyboy



Joined: Thu May 29th, 2014
Location: Los Angeles, California USA
Posts: 28
Status: 
Offline
Mana: 
Interesting piece.  It moves along very quickly.  I imagined Charles Chaplin and that big rough actor who always played the cop or the Coal Miner or the Bartender in his films. It has a very anachronistic feel but i imagine that is certainly what yo were going for.  I could almost see the "hand cranked" image and the dialogue cards flipping by.

There is an anarchic absurdism about it - reminds me a bit of Ubi Roi by Alfred Jarry.  Were you consuming laudinum when you wrote this??  LOL.

- Jim C