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 Posted: Fri Jul 11th, 2014 09:59 am
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RoWright

 

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Funny and yes moving fast from top to bottom. Great pace of exchanging smartass lines :) The ending prayer is puzzling but that's what you are going for. You might as well have a bear on a tricycle entering the stage at that point. Since Laphillyboy compared it a bit to Jarry's work make sure you are ready to have rotten tomatoes thrown at you for such blasphemies :) It will leave the audience with a WTF on their faces and that's healthy.