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 Posted: Mon Mar 14th, 2016 05:30 am
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in media res

 

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I don't accept the premise. Lots of people get away with murder.

I'd check your punctuation to make things clearer. I am sort of intrigued, but it is not clear.

Yeeeeahh...I knooooooooooow......."they" teach you to make the "logline" in one or two sentences.

But that is BS. Nothing is better than clarity.

Again, check your punctuation to help make it clearer.

At least that is my suggestion.

Best,

IMR