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|Posted: Tue Jun 28th, 2016 08:09 am||
in media res
|Sorry about the neighbor, timmy. It is very sad.
Had a friend drown when I was 14 from a snowmobile going over thin ice.
This tore my guts out:
"Tears could be seen
from across the street."
I like the visual of "seen" not the audible of "heard."
LOVE the 3rd Stanza. Never heard the sorrow and remorse - but also the reality of survivorship - expressed so eloquently. Just beautiful.