|View single post by in media res|
|Posted: Thu Jul 20th, 2017 06:50 am||
in media res
This needs a some work.
But, the "story" is very interesting! I like it. Could be quite powerful.
I would consult with your instuctors for more.
Advice: Triple proof-read out loud. You need some paragraph separations.
Example: "who have been through" should read "Who has been through."
Believe me, the smallest mistake in a first contact letter can doom the writer, because it is your introduction to their theatre, as it shows a lack of attention to detail.