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 Posted: Sat Sep 30th, 2006 09:07 am
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BrianRobertNeal



Joined: Sat Sep 23rd, 2006
Location: Bishop's Stortford, United Kingdom
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Hi,

   You've somehow broken out of the random assemblage of usually emotional "bullet points" that characterises a lot of free form blank verse.

A very open poem that leaves the reader room to import their emotions.

(Oh God I've become a Poseur!-Pseuds' corner for you my boy.)

I really should just say-I liked this,

Brian