View single post by David R. Garland
 Posted: Wed Oct 23rd, 2019 08:19 am
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David R. Garland



Joined: Sun Oct 20th, 2019
Location: Toledo, Ohio USA
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Time,
Like the vulture flies
High in thin, wispy near cloudless skies.

In our youth,
Merely a speck in our eyes
There was time.

Seemingly endless
time.

OK, I have thought on your comments, and with most I agree. The superfluous comma, and the stanza breaks, are notions that I wholeheartedly concur with. Thank you. As far a the capitalization? That was just how I was taught, I am old, and I wonder if it is truly such a big deal? I guess, I just adore the traditional aspects of it. Foolish of me as it maybe. I will think more on it. Thank you, for your time, and thoughtful consideration.