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 Posted: Fri Oct 13th, 2006 07:41 pm
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I liked it.  I liked the unconstructed images that flash into the consicousness unfettered and uncontrolled.  I know poetry is always structured, but I like poems that give the appearance of hanging untethered mid air without resting on the structure of punctuation. 

Okay, that's just me, but I enjoyed reading it. 

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