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 Posted: Thu Nov 9th, 2006 12:47 am
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Mana: 
I agree, lovely.  And the images are grand.  I tried it in the present tense and liked it even more.  You might want to experiment with that.  It seemed to increase the urgency of the moment and the images as well.

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