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 Posted: Tue Feb 13th, 2007 12:54 pm
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J Brian Long


Joined: Tue Jan 30th, 2007
Location: USA
Posts: 77

The second strophe resonates most with me. This is where the poem

really begins to happen:

"you were given life & visitors

came: sisters, neighbors, teachers, 

men in books—

they all watched

you grow, gave you advice

concerning geometry, red

licorice & white panty love"


I also like:



yourself onto the floor,"


--J Brian Long