View single post by muncy
 Posted: Tue Feb 20th, 2007 06:31 pm
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Too many comma's for me. I prefer short sentences to get the attention. How about:

On the bleeding edge of the Trojan War, one woman wakes to find her world shattered and a thriving kingdom within her grip. Facing intense scrutiny from her advisors, pressure from a suitor and a swelling call to vengeance, she’s forced onto a path to find both herself and her power. Clytemnestra is inspired by various myths, including Aeschylus' Agamemnon,  and explores one woman's journey from heartbreaking loss to political triumph. From victim to victor, the maligned queen ascends the throne with horrifying consequences.