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 Posted: Mon Sep 24th, 2007 02:57 pm
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I don't believe that I know enough to give you any helpful feedback on any kind of academic level.  In fact, I probably shouldn't be posting this at all.  The reason I am is because a few of your words jumped out at me and struck me as not in your best interest.    They are:  "It is a metaphor. I need to find a way to make the audience understand . . ."

For this writer, all is metaphor and "making an audience understand" seems a bit beyond our capacity as human writers.

For what it is worth,

P.S. Great luck with this.  Your play does sound very interesting.