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 Posted: Tue Feb 13th, 2007 12:52 am
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timmy
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Mana: 
at the end of our

relationship

i finally met you in a physical

world

it was larger than we were

used

to, unpleasant really, a place
where five dogs ripped along my

arms

your love eventually hurried away

pounding

like ten naked women each morning
turning toward a man who cannot

return

their love, their heart breaking

love

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