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 Posted: Fri Jan 25th, 2008 08:49 pm
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DWolfman
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TEARDROPS


Teardrops on the sea of time were floating side by side.

One was bold enough to ask, "Please tell why you were cried."

"I'm the tear of one who lost her man," was the reply.

"She who won him," spoke the first, "Soon shed me from her eye."
 


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 Posted: Sun Jan 27th, 2008 05:41 pm
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Nice sound here. Nice picture. Nice poem.

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 Posted: Fri Feb 5th, 2010 07:33 pm
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This reminds me of some situations that I had to go through in the past.

I love this poem so much.

Really nice imagery, love the way how you put the words in order.

 

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