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 Posted: Sat Feb 23rd, 2008 08:23 pm
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Thank you
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 Posted: Sat Feb 23rd, 2008 03:18 pm
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This really effected me, especially in it's simplicity.

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 Posted: Fri Feb 22nd, 2008 11:42 pm
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timmy, must be a great poem, because unlike kris, I got a tear in my eye.

two different reactions!

terrific piece.


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This poem made me chuckle in a dry way, and reminded me of how much I used to enjoy Stephen Crane's "lines."

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this man and an empty room, cracked
heart in hands

his weary arms, no place
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