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 Posted: Tue Aug 12th, 2008 04:17 pm
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I just wrote this in the last 30 minutes. Heard that writing poems can be therapeutic, so I'm giving it a shot.


A mind shot
So tired and beat
Time to let go
Just hope you forgot

Do I over analyze and contemplate
Should I be confused
Looking for something to compensate
For this lack of being

Sounds like misery
Feels like complacency
Did I miss that boat or
Is it coming back for me

I hear the music
But my senses defy me
It’s time to use it
Could be my last chance

If it were a light switch
I’d hold it down til death
Thought I’d be ok
Just take a breath



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