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 Posted: Thu Oct 23rd, 2008 03:30 pm
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Okay, well it's titled The Red Monologue and here is part of it...
Mother, you won't believe what all happened to me today! I was on the way to Grandmama's house; like you asked, when all of a sudden, a BIG - MEAN - UGLY - BAD WOLF jumped out onto the path --- right in front of me! I wasn't scared though. Well, maybe a little.
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http://hubpages.com/hub/TheRedMonologue

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ProCW

PS... I appreciate all feedback -- praise and criticism are both welcomed! :)

Last edited on Fri Nov 21st, 2008 12:12 pm by ProCW

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 Posted: Thu Nov 20th, 2008 10:16 pm
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Monologues in categories like Classical, Dramatic and Comedic. The have tons of movie monolgues and monologues for children. So the feel free to look around. We're sure you will find a monologue or two that's right for you.
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 Posted: Sat Nov 22nd, 2008 04:06 pm
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ProCW,

Welcome to the forum.  It's a great place and I hope you stick around for awhile.


When I clicked on your link and saw the monologue, it seemed to be complete, published and ready to be performed.  What good would a critique accomplish?  Are you open to reconsidering the monologue and, perhaps, changing it?

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 Posted: Sat Nov 22nd, 2008 07:28 pm
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Hey there, Edd.

Thanks for the welcome! :)

I'm open to all suggestions!!! :)

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I've recently done another version of/adaptation to The Red Monologue...

It's called
The Red Monologue 2.0 and I'd love to have any feedback.

Thanks.

Last edited on Thu Jul 14th, 2011 02:51 am by ProCW

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