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 Posted: Wed Dec 3rd, 2008 05:38 am
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I see. By death do you mean little death? As in sexual climax? I just see that in my head. Probably just me. What do you say?

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it's funny and weird and apparently has a sort of cult following.  If you have ON Demand ATV you can get it from that

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Thanks. I have weird thoughts sometimes :)

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am not familiar w/your movie. I followed your link. It looks charming. I shall rent it over X-Mas and watch.

Thank you.

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Great line timmy:

i’d like to nail my sex
thoughts to the wall
next to our bed,
study physics and you
and measure all that has
never been measured:




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http://www.myspace.com/thelastromanticmovie

Hi Timmy

There I was thinking about you last night when I was watching this little movie on my On demand TV.

Have you see it by any chance?

http://www.augustfilms.com/lastromantic/

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This must be what’s it’s like
floating inside the red balloon
you released by its string
on a windy day.

Over and beyond i am carried
past small cities, turning cats’ heads
in curiosity as i climb blue,
becoming a speck on the dusk.

i’d like to nail my sex
thoughts to the wall
next to our bed,
study physics and you
and measure all that has
never been measured:
the coastline of the British Isles,
the reverberation of snare drums,
the downdraft of your chimney, or
how long it takes for me to catch my breath
watching you sleep every morning.

My ending will no doubt be tragic—
much like the paralytic poet
who can no longer find the images
to communicate this life
to the next.

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