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 Posted: Wed Jun 24th, 2009 12:24 pm
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The blonde at the table
next

could eat me
raw

if only she would
smile

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 Posted: Wed Jun 24th, 2009 04:37 pm
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timmy,

your poem hit my laugh strings.  Thanks
Michael

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 Posted: Wed Jun 24th, 2009 09:16 pm
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tee-hee, timmy.

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 Posted: Wed Jun 24th, 2009 10:56 pm
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Sushitimmi.

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Is this the poem to be carved in stone?

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I think the only thing carved in stone was her stern expression.

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maybe you could email her

Oh sorry Gov. Didn't mean to say that.


Timmy love that tiny tiny poem

Last edited on Sun Jun 28th, 2009 02:45 am by Potabasil

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