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 Posted: Sat Oct 10th, 2009 02:48 pm
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LickleLisha
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When a loss so dear enters your heart,
Your body jolts with a frightening start,
For you loved that person so close and so dear,
And now there gone you have this fear.
An awakening pain that aches so much,
That longing feeling for one last touch,
To wish there was another day,
To wish that feeling would go away,
The one that lingers in our minds,
And this huge loss will tie the binds,
And keep us together in our lives.


You’re gone and yet you’re near, you’re far and yet you’re still close.


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 Posted: Fri Feb 5th, 2010 07:08 pm
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Really nice rhime.

I seriously connected to this.

I loved it.

Kudos, a lot..a lot of kudos. [:

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