That is the best example of Fat-Free - yet calorie filled - Writing I have seen in a long, long time.
in media res
And to Potabasil,
"Take out of this world the men who have drunk through the past, and you would take away all the poetry and literature and practically all the works of genius that the world has produced. What kind of poem do you suppose you would get out of a glass of ice-water?"
This is the first poem I read from you and even though is not long, even though probably you weren't trying to be profound, it has a profound meaning for me. My question here is: you are not living how or what you would like to be living?