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 Posted: Tue Dec 29th, 2009 02:57 pm
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God,
I'm dying
to live

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 Posted: Sat Jan 2nd, 2010 09:54 pm
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Thought I was dying New Year's day
I'm giving up the drink...............honest

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 Posted: Mon Jan 4th, 2010 03:07 pm
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timmy,

That is the best example of Fat-Free - yet calorie filled - Writing I have seen in a long, long time.

Thanks.

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And to Potabasil,

"Take out of this world the men who have drunk through the past, and you would take away all the poetry and literature and practically all the works of genius that the world has produced. What kind of poem do you suppose you would get out of a glass of ice-water?"

- Clarence Darrow

"Verdicts Out of Court."

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 Posted: Mon Jan 4th, 2010 08:39 pm
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No...thank you, IMR.  And a belated Happy New Year to you.  Almost tried this poem in reverse order

Potabasil:  "Never" say never...honest.  I tried that once...didn't work  :0

timmy

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This is the first poem I read from you and even though is not long, even though probably you weren't trying to be profound, it has a profound meaning for me. My question here is: you are not living how or what you would like to be living?

 I like your work!!!!!!!!

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