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 Posted: Wed Jul 21st, 2010 02:34 am
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timmy
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There is a silence
about the hands,
holding the mirror

There is a soundless
edge on which flower-
bits break

Tell the truth:
anyone who has ever
said something to you,
the way I have
said it to you, has lied

I envy you
being so young

I would kill every day
until the world lives
with you in it

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 Posted: Wed Jul 21st, 2010 03:58 am
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Simply beautifuly, timmy.

kris


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 Posted: Wed Jul 21st, 2010 12:44 pm
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Whoa . . . to be the object of that feeling.  Absolutely beautiful.

And where exactly is it you live? :)

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