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 Posted: Sun Dec 5th, 2010 04:45 am
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Canio
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Trapped inside a clear U shaped tube
He is poured into a cylindrical borosilicate glass of air, water, and warmth
An aroma of youthful wine clouds his thoughts
Falling on him like rain from the heavens pink roses
They die quickly
The mixture blends


Inserted is one catalyst
A single red rose petal
It falls gracefully into the glass unruffled
He melts into bitter hot green liquid
The mixture blends


BOOM!!!

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Hello, Canio,

Welcome to the forum. I enjoyed this poem and your use of language.

kris

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