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I’m in flu
You rack lag my back
You insult the sulk that I lead out of desperation of attack
I’m in the cold
I’m in no mood for your overweight violence

we sit in silence

I refuse to listen
you won’t talk till I listen
I won’t listen till you say
what I want to hear


I’ve glared with sincerity
And battled all authority
You’ve got what u want from me
I’m better off I know
…I’m pretty slow
And I crash back
Slack back
Down attack
You quack on the phone
…You just wait till I squall out my moan
While you control on the phone
I boom boom
From the dark living room
I make my cough louder and rub my nose redder
I hit my head harder
And suddenly I’m iller and in no place to hear insult

I hear it
pure sympathy
My symphony of sniffs coughs, growls and crows
Down past the sofa crack in the dust of the fall
The dust mites call
And crawl
To me
In the speck dust glitter of a shallow beam of light
I watch their flight
Up my savalon padded nose
That redness grows
I’m sure
THE PURE THROB
Makes me sob
I take a double dose
Of herbal (guaranteed immune system strength) foul tasting wrench down pills
Followed by capsules for the blocked nose
still
Everlasting cold fills
With an extra bowl of soup
That gloops down my sticky ooped goo mucus flu trooped gullet
And slob all day in the deep lag bullet proof depths
Of my double sleeping bag
And that’s my day
All wrapped up double flu
Down double wrapped in me
In the double down depths of my double sleeping bag.

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