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 Posted: Sun Sep 24th, 2006 05:22 pm
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BrianRobertNeal
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Mana: 
His knife slashes the face and breasts

Of a helpless young stewardess,

Whose crime was to wish a nice day.

Is there anything else to say?

 

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 Posted: Sun Sep 24th, 2006 06:06 pm
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Mana: 
"shutter vision" springs to mind :P

But my personal politics aside - it was very powerful and packed a lot of punch.

Short, strong, evocative.

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 Posted: Sun Sep 24th, 2006 06:28 pm
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BrianRobertNeal
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Thank you.

An aside, I find it amusing that on a North American Web Site I get a review from somebody 40 miles +/- up the road.

Brian

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 Posted: Sun Sep 24th, 2006 09:50 pm
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Brian,

Just a note to let you know that this is not a North American website.  This site was designed and is paid for by The Internet Theatre Bookshop which is based in the UK.  Small world, isn't it?

What did you write today?

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 Posted: Mon Sep 25th, 2006 06:49 am
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BrianRobertNeal
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Ta,

My confusion is understandable,

Now I'm gonna be quite frank

How comes the average mod

Is a James Arthur Rank?

PS what about my original poem.

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