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"How long have I toiled? A month? A year? A thousand years? But it can’t be a thousand years...No matter, my work is done. My creatures are not living, but they are perfect! I have here a Mannequin, a creature that is better than all the others. Come my offspring, show me what you are!" Phed, the Lord of Nothing

My name is Adam Foltin, I am 17 years old and I live in NYC. I am currently looking to do something with my play, which can be found herehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/16wIF_ju0UmoaUZfG6XiKV12yDcTI03rfzFA5KyQE3ng/edit?usp=sharing. It is a full 90 pages long on google docs, and I'm really excited 'cause I finished it about a week ago.

It is best described as realistic fiction with a fantasy aesthetic, if anyone wants to read it and give some constructive criticism, I would be very happy, as I still have a large to-do list. I need to clean up most of the play and listen to more and more feedback. I only just finished, but I'm looking to do big things with this.

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