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 Posted: Sat Mar 15th, 2014 07:03 pm
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Across the snow marshes
behind my home, blue illusions
structure its edges as a lone hawk
dips and circles in his mating dance

Ah, this slow pace system
of systems, whirling and turning
northern expectations like March kites—
it’s about all rational humans
can stand as we wait patiently
for grasshopper men to drive through
the warm blades of summer

The sun sets stronger, reining
over a weakening, bleak wind;
V geese are reappearing; first
it was snowing, and now it’s not—
yet, I can’t find the moment it stopped

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Ooooooooooh, timmy.

My, oh, my, oooooooooh, timmmmmmmmmyyyyy!

As my wife's little daughter use to say as a baby when given something precious…

"teeku!"


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I saw my first Robin in and evergreen today. Sent an e-mail pic after a loooong Winnnnnnterbrrrrrr to many, with the Subject Line: HOPE.

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